I need a week, but I do not think a week will cut it. Between work, Housework, dog regularly on my tail. How do other Authors do it? I’m curious that is all.

Yes, I received my evaluation back from my second book even though it came back positive, it still needs work. Lately, I cannot seem to focus on it, I feel that no matter how many times I re-write it I just cannot make it better. Yes, my characters need work, and I need to be more in-tune by living the story and not telling the story. I know I will get there, but my brain cannot seem to focus on it.

This is what my Evaluation said, I’m not going to bore you will all he or she said, but I’m hopeful I can do it that is why I need a writing coach.

Overview
When Max and Megan first met, they had a passionate but short-lived love affair. Then he disappeared from her life.  Three years later, they find themselves reunited,  and discover that the passion that brought them together in the first place is still there. However, Megan also discovers some details of his history that don’t align
with the man she knows. When that history comes back to haunt them, it threatens to destroy the new life they have built for themselves.
Introduction
I quite enjoyed reading the draft of your manuscript and was impressed with how you add a compelling level of suspense to a romance novel. That blend makes the story engaging and fresh, and there is a lot of potentials to be explored here.
I feel some tweaks are required to help bring out those strengths, and this evaluation is intended to help as you work through your next round of revisions.

Anyway, have an awesome day, RWAC ladies see you this afternoon.

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