I feel, that Editing was not the best on this one, I paid for complex copy editing, Still, a lot of errors and I’m not even an Editor. With the help of Grammarly, I”m fixing it.
it does look a little better, but as I read on, I see a phrase that doesn’t make sense is that normal. – anyway, just a few more days and I should have it finished for formatting. My Aunt is doing the final read.